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  1. #1
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    Default Please Review my site

    Hello All,

    Here is my site "www.ronbodellhomes.com" which is about Chandler AZ Real Estate, please review and give your valuable comments.

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    Hey Ron,

    Some quick first impression points...

    Overall the site looks clean and professional. I've seen worse, a lot worse... BUT my first impression is - too basic and dated.

    The Flash animation header is not bad. It establishes what the site is about and it works. Good choice of artwork.

    The intro text is a bit text heavy. I know it helps with the SEO, but I doubt that many visitors will take time to read it. If nothing else, add more artwork to it and break it up into paragraphs.

    I would suggest to use a better quality photo. The picture of you is fine but it's overcompressed.

    I'm not sure if the "resources" help. There is so much good, up to date info on the interwebs these days, will somebody really go to an agent's website to read about the benefits "rent vs. own"? Again, I know the site needs to content to rank, but I think the content could be more up to date.

    I like the short and sweet contact me form. Consider changing the last label Summary of Request - to something friendlier like your question, or your comment.

    And a final (technical) note - your site doesn't have <title> tags - only "Fidelity".

    Hope this helps, Ron.
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    Ron,
    I would suggest making your phone number larger and more prominent on the site.
    Jim Olenbush, CRS, GRI
    Broker / Realtor

    Jim is the broker and owner of Cantera Real Estate in Austin, Texas. His team specializes in Lake Austin real estate and Lake Travis real estate.

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    Hello Ron,

    Your website has a lot of good info. One of the things I would update would be your profile picture. I like it makes your website look a ittle dated.

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