What do you guys think? I need some help to write a good compelling lens. It ranked at 49000 then fell to 62000. Here is my lens. Any tips to improve the wording?

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Charlotte House Buyers/Stop Foreclosure Specialist/Sell your Charlotte House
Sell Charlotte House l Short Sale my House l Charlotte Wholesale Properties
Great site i want to rank #1 for at least 10 keywords.
We buy houses in Charlotte, North Carolina and surrounding areas. Stop foreclosure in Charlotte, NC fast & easy by selling your house to us, guaranteed offers in hours. Charlottes Foreclosure Expert, helping homeowners behind on payments.

With this as your caption, "When most people thinks "Charlotte Real Estate Market" they think stability." I think I'll defer to the 'others'.

You do have some different ideas, I would be interested in your source of information that contradicts the information you question.

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Don Price REALTOR®
Advanced Real Estate Services & Staging
Pinehurst, North Carolina

Pinehurst Real Estate | REO-BPO-Brokers | REO-BPO-Brokers Blog

i don't think this is the place to talk about that unless we change forum topics.

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Charlotte House Buyers/Stop Foreclosure Specialist/Sell your Charlotte House
Sell Charlotte House l Short Sale my House l Charlotte Wholesale Properties
Great site i want to rank #1 for at least 10 keywords.
We buy houses in Charlotte, North Carolina and surrounding areas. Stop foreclosure in Charlotte, NC fast & easy by selling your house to us, guaranteed offers in hours. Charlottes Foreclosure Expert, helping homeowners behind on payments.

GetSmart - Have you considered creating a profile in Squidoo and joining some groups? If you invest a little time into the Squidoo community, I bet it will pay off

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Ryan A. Martin - Windermere Real Estate / Whatcom Inc.

Your Bellingham real estate professional specializing in the listing and sales of Bellingham condos. Also check out my Anacortes real estate website for information about Fidalgo Island and Anacortes, WA

thats a excellent ryan, soon as i learn how to get around in there. just seeing what its all about, but joining a group probably would be the best way to get in the squidwho.

thanks.

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Charlotte House Buyers/Stop Foreclosure Specialist/Sell your Charlotte House
Sell Charlotte House l Short Sale my House l Charlotte Wholesale Properties
Great site i want to rank #1 for at least 10 keywords.
We buy houses in Charlotte, North Carolina and surrounding areas. Stop foreclosure in Charlotte, NC fast & easy by selling your house to us, guaranteed offers in hours. Charlottes Foreclosure Expert, helping homeowners behind on payments.

Ryan, you were right bud. After i did what you recommended my lens moved through the ranks. Thanks for the ensight!

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Charlotte House Buyers/Stop Foreclosure Specialist/Sell your Charlotte House
Sell Charlotte House l Short Sale my House l Charlotte Wholesale Properties
Great site i want to rank #1 for at least 10 keywords.
We buy houses in Charlotte, North Carolina and surrounding areas. Stop foreclosure in Charlotte, NC fast & easy by selling your house to us, guaranteed offers in hours. Charlottes Foreclosure Expert, helping homeowners behind on payments.

You are quite welcome.

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Ryan A. Martin - Windermere Real Estate / Whatcom Inc.

Your Bellingham real estate professional specializing in the listing and sales of Bellingham condos. Also check out my Anacortes real estate website for information about Fidalgo Island and Anacortes, WA

What is the benefit of having a higher ranked squidoo profile?

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Holland Michigan Real Estate | Holland MI Real Estate | Lake Michigan Real Estate

i am not quite sure yet since i just really started geting into it. when i logged in today, i just noticed that the rank was pretty impressive since i don't really write articles.

i think getting lens moved to a better rank will get me on the front page of the top 100 lens and since it is estimated that over 200,000 new visitors are coming to squidoo. at that rate i would like to be one of the first ones to get my message on their so potential clients that don't know they are clients will read my message and want more information.

if i am going over the top at least i have a link and hopefully rank on the serps.

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Charlotte House Buyers/Stop Foreclosure Specialist/Sell your Charlotte House
Sell Charlotte House l Short Sale my House l Charlotte Wholesale Properties
Great site i want to rank #1 for at least 10 keywords.
We buy houses in Charlotte, North Carolina and surrounding areas. Stop foreclosure in Charlotte, NC fast & easy by selling your house to us, guaranteed offers in hours. Charlottes Foreclosure Expert, helping homeowners behind on payments.

Minor tweaks and joining groups certainly have value, however, you will not move up in lensrank unless you have a substantial amount of traffic. I've never seen traditional real estate lenses rank well at Squidoo. Squidoo is good for long tail type keyphrases.

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