Please review the site:

www.brokeroncall.com

tks.

design look good, and like the logo

under For Buyers, 3rd bullet, pacakge misspelled

would include more content are spell out what you are trying to sell

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You should emphasize this statement: "BrokerOnCall connects you instantly with local real estate professionals ready to serve you right now."

I would move that statement to the banner area where it says, "Information and Access now". Replace "Information and Access now" with "BrokerOnCall connects you instantly with local real estate professionals ready to serve you right now." "Information and Access now" is a little too vague. It could mean so many things. It's best to let your viewers know right away, what the site is about.

Hi over40,
Can't see too much wrong with your site on the sellers page 3rd bullet : • Utilize the resources of a driven local professional who understands "the your" market and knows what it takes to get the job done should it be with "the" or "your" ? maybe just a slight typing error, apart fom that short and to the point maybe some more text is needed to explain more of what yo do for the laymans out there
Hope this helps

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John
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It's OK. Seems a little too impersonal for me. I would rather see pictures of real people or an area where you work.

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Thank you for the reviews.... and the spelling catches.

Yeah some personal pictures would really make this a solid website, but other than that it looks good now.

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